Pop, might I make a suggestion.
It seems you are writing several essays at once, all of which depend upon the others. The essay you cite
here cites this essay, which is still unfinished. While I realize you want to keep moving on, and responses can be slow, you must also realize that by moving on, your new theories may be completely debunked by a mistake in an earlier theory. Try to solidify one before moving on. Additionally don't cite a theory here that depends on the theory already in question, it turns into cyclical reasoning which you will be stuck in like a whirlpool while everyone else tries to throw you a line.
