Quatrain Corner

[infamous]

Originally Posted by IrishEyes

Amazing grace-
how sweet it sounds.
But how many really know
what it means?

Amazing grace,
how sweet the sound.
Secure in God,s love,
eternal peace is found.

.................Infamous

[orbsycli]

amazing grace
is the fly
how i can never smack her
no matter how hard i try

amazing grace
is the mind
no god to piss on me
no wasted prayers

[Turtle]

Originally Posted by infamous

Amazing grace,
how sweet the sound.
Secure in God,s love,
eternal peace is found.

.................Infamous

Nice reprise Infamous. I learned reprise from Master Orby Wandyouknowme.
At the risk of interupting the quatrain....wait, I'll just use four lines,
the man who wrote the song was a vile, murderous, raping, slave trading,
torturing, contemptable man. And yet he did write the song. Amazing. Grace.

[orbsycli]

that sounds like america
what a perfect song
about god for america
by a rapist

[Turtle]

Originally Posted by orbsycli

that sounds like america
what a perfect song
about god for america
by a rapist

Reprise:
that sounds like the world,
what a perfect song
where grace is dog not God
and anyone can know it if they take the time.

[orbsycli]

take the time
and put it in taboos
why not
?

[orbsycli]

for a fan of the change
listen to dark side of the moon
they reprise breathe
"home....home again. i like to be here, when i can" AHHHH I LOVE IT

[orbsycli]

HOW HIGH CAN YOU FLY?
caught in the soundshine
of lights red and blue
looks like the police are on to you

so let them cuff you
let them move you
onto plastic seats
listen to their dispatcher sing crime

lurking in the shadows of very tall structures
we can fly
we can fly!
we will always fly

[orbsycli]

red light
green light
blue fish
kish

[Tarantism]

hello there all!
im here and im honered
thus my first post
in the quatrain corner!