Hi
clapstyx,
Basically, I understood all the words you used, but not the meaning you meant to convey. Therefore I am unable to comment in that respect. However, I would suggest that you are dealing with complex ideas. If you wish others to understand your meaning, you need to structure and punctuate your sentences better. This is particularly so for those members and guests for whom English is a second language. For example:
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Originally Posted by clapstyx A conceptual representation of intelligence is an interesting goal challenge to try and create in itself with, I suspect, consciousness expanding ramifications inherent in the pursuit. |
I think this means:
"A conceptual representation of intelligence is an interesting goal challenge to try and create in itself; with, I suspect, consciousness expanding ramifications inherent in the pursuit."
A semi-colon makes all the difference! However, even this could be made more easy to follow if you broke it into two sentences and eliminated superfluous words:
"A conceptual representation of intelligence is, in itself, an interesting challenge to try and create. I suspect it would have consciousness expanding ramifications."
No doubt it could be phrased even better than this, but I hope this is sufficient to illustrate the problem.
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Originally Posted by clapstyx If you consciously pursue perfect harmony with the truth the mind searches for any and every element of possible error in a statement, because harmony is about eliminating negative to perfection due deferences. |
The begining of this sentence can be improved by puctuating it:
"If you consciously pursue perfect harmony with the truth, the mind searches for any and every element of possible error in a statement."
But the phrase "because harmony is about eliminating negative to perfection due deferences" is simply gibberish. I cannot puctuate it in any way to elicit a meaning. I'm sure that there are ideas in the OP that you are trying to communicate, but the language you have used is a barrier to comprehension. As
Boerseun has suggested, can you phrase your ideas in a few simple sentences?